Final, re-worked version of my Samus Aran "Kaboom" piece~ I did my first go at this beginning of last year, and while it was a good coloured piece...I feel it looks rushed. And maybe it was~ last year was my first ever time to exhibit at a con and I wanted a sizable bunch of complete works to show at the event.
Now that I got that out of my system however, I can breathe easy and concentrate more on delivering art with more attention from my end
The foreshortening on this piece is very well done and I really love the way you have her armor breaking up. The expression on her face looks really good and tortured although there is something about the forehead that bugs me a little. The background feels a little out of place with the style but it is still effective.
Hope that was of some help.
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The foreshortening on this piece is very well done and I really love the way you have her armor breaking up. The expression on her face looks really good and tortured although there is something about the forehead that bugs me a little. The background feels a little out of place with the style but it is still effective.
Hope that was of some help.
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